Odin’s Sky


How the sky trembled  ꭫ with Odin’s temper
Sleipnir’s hooves striking ꭫ skirring the storm sped
Thundering ever swift ꭫ the walls of night swayed
In tumult flew this host ꭫ a raging torrid horde
Grim the god rode ꭫ grief his final ruin
Upon the dales of Vigrid ꭫ the demiurges are veiled
For murderous bond ꭫ their fathers had bore
Weighed in strife’s gold ꭫ the brothers stirring gained
Havoc seduced their will ꭫ the wergild, eternal war
And Ymir’s flesh wrought ꭫ reckoned the earth’s ruin
For bone, hard rock smashed ꭫ for skull, soft sky shattered
For blood, blue seas burned red ꭫ and Yggdrasil’s roots lay wrecked
Eld’s seers well foresaw ꭫ Odin wandering fare
Always on due day ꭫ his wisdom dared
To gain with will o’er fate ꭫ he grimly gathered fell
Carrion to fend his right ꭫ and coax the bright-sun rise
To light the dying worlds ꭫ to wright with wisdom’s words.
Well met was Odin’s fear ꭫ when swallowed up Fenrir
The fates of all men ꭫ grasped by merciless maw.

©2026 R.A.R. Knight


Author’s Note:

I set out to capture the Norse vision of fate as a contract sealed in the act of creation. In this inescapable momentum toward Ragnarök itself, there is a notion of original sin. Even the wisest god cannot rewrite the primal debt owed for Ymir’s murder. The poem, however, also conceives of ‘strife’ as a fundamental force, necessary in a cosmological setting, much as the pre-Socratic sage Heraclitus revealed.

Editor’s Note:

If you want to learn more about Norse mythology and Ragnarök follow this link to read a translation of the Voluspa with notes on names you see in this poem.

The author writes mainly alliterative verse and poems centuries out of date. You can find him on Substack @traditionalpoet and (active) on X with the handle @trad_poet. He lives in Nth Queensland, Australia. He has had poems accepted for publication in journals like Forgotten Ground Regained, the VoegelinView, Reveille Journal, and La Rotonde.

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